| Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan | |
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Alex
Posts : 37 Join date : 2009-08-18
| Subject: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Tue Aug 18, 2009 6:03 pm | |
| Habbo Name: stefano-BarVia Full RP Name: Kotonoshi Kiso. Nicknames: Flaming Dragon. Age: 18 Gender: Male Height: 6'11 Weight: 120 pounds Birthplace: Kai region Appearance: Personality: Sexy. Items Carried: Three headed spear ( Like Yukimura sanada's in orochi warriors ) Normal red katana light weight red leather shirt and pants. Background/History:Koto at the age of 9 was training in the martial arts corner of life , soon known to be the greatest warrior of japan for his instict of a warrior , and his great martial adept , he over came the previous kong-fu master at age of 12 , then soon continued to his conquest when his father created the Kiso clan , soon to over come kai and take over the castle , now tiems have apssed he is now 18 and a higher skilled martial artist and the leader of his family/clan.
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Black Jesus Admin
Posts : 46 Join date : 2009-08-16
| Subject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Tue Aug 18, 2009 11:25 pm | |
| Denied. Redo the History makes little of no senses to mys headsicle. | |
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Alex
Posts : 37 Join date : 2009-08-18
| Subject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Wed Aug 19, 2009 8:07 am | |
| Are you actually that fucked up? A 5 year old child can udnerstand that. If its denied just because of my history that fucking bullshit. Its not declined its perfectly fine. | |
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Alex
Posts : 37 Join date : 2009-08-18
| Subject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Wed Aug 19, 2009 1:19 pm | |
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Seaton
Posts : 49 Join date : 2009-08-18
| Subject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Wed Aug 19, 2009 7:39 pm | |
| Someone so low classifies themself as someone so high? the greatest in Japan? actually earn that rank then add that to your background. | |
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Eliot
Posts : 2 Join date : 2009-08-17
| Subject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Wed Aug 19, 2009 7:48 pm | |
| Seaton your comments are unnecessary 80% of the time. | |
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Tyrol
Posts : 61 Join date : 2009-08-16
| Subject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Wed Aug 19, 2009 9:49 pm | |
| - Alex wrote:
- I re-did history.
Still makes no sense. | |
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Steve Admin
Posts : 55 Join date : 2009-08-15 Location : Where Eagles Cry and Vultures Laugh
| Subject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Wed Aug 19, 2009 10:15 pm | |
| Denied.
Your character's status of "the greatest warrior in Japan" as well as the rest of the history/background is considered godmoding (otherwise making your character seem invincible or of importance) and a "Mary Sue" (a character or writing style that portrays ultimate traits). | |
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Tyrol
Posts : 61 Join date : 2009-08-16
| Subject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Wed Aug 19, 2009 10:15 pm | |
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Alex
Posts : 37 Join date : 2009-08-18
| Subject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Thu Aug 20, 2009 2:35 pm | |
| I never said He actually was the greatest , Its a title. | |
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Steve Admin
Posts : 55 Join date : 2009-08-15 Location : Where Eagles Cry and Vultures Laugh
| Subject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Thu Aug 20, 2009 6:56 pm | |
| Regardless, it's still not allowed to show some sort of supremacy in your character. | |
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GrandFatherTumnus
Posts : 30 Join date : 2009-08-17 Age : 34 Location : Nowhere to be seen nor found
| Subject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Thu Aug 20, 2009 8:40 pm | |
| Make a Valid Story Atleast? And become the greatest while you roleplay along the way........ not make some bio telling us your the greatest then protesting it's a title.. because why bother having the title if your not the so called best? | |
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