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Alex



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PostSubject: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan   Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Icon_minitimeTue Aug 18, 2009 6:03 pm

Habbo Name: stefano-BarVia
Full RP Name: Kotonoshi Kiso.
Nicknames: Flaming Dragon.
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Height: 6'11
Weight: 120 pounds
Birthplace: Kai region

Appearance: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Yukimura
Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Yukimura_for_Kaiii_by_tanukitchokes
Personality: Sexy.
Items Carried:
Three headed spear ( Like Yukimura sanada's in orochi warriors )
Normal red katana
light weight red leather shirt and pants.

Background/History:Koto at the age of 9 was training in the martial arts corner of life , soon known to be the greatest warrior of japan for his instict of a warrior , and his great martial adept , he over came the previous kong-fu master at age of 12 , then soon continued to his conquest when his father created the Kiso clan , soon to over come kai and take over the castle , now tiems have apssed he is now 18 and a higher skilled martial artist and the leader of his family/clan.


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PostSubject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan   Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Icon_minitimeTue Aug 18, 2009 11:25 pm

Denied. Redo the History makes little of no senses to mys headsicle.
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Alex



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PostSubject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan   Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Icon_minitimeWed Aug 19, 2009 8:07 am

Are you actually that fucked up? A 5 year old child can udnerstand that. If its denied just because of my history that fucking bullshit. Its not declined its perfectly fine.
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Alex



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PostSubject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan   Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Icon_minitimeWed Aug 19, 2009 1:19 pm

I re-did history.
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Seaton



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PostSubject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan   Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Icon_minitimeWed Aug 19, 2009 7:39 pm

Someone so low classifies themself as someone so high? the greatest in Japan? actually earn that rank then add that to your background.
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Eliot



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PostSubject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan   Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Icon_minitimeWed Aug 19, 2009 7:48 pm

Seaton your comments are unnecessary 80% of the time.
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Tyrol



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PostSubject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan   Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Icon_minitimeWed Aug 19, 2009 9:49 pm

Alex wrote:
I re-did history.
Still makes no sense.
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PostSubject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan   Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Icon_minitimeWed Aug 19, 2009 10:15 pm

Denied.

Your character's status of "the greatest warrior in Japan" as well as the rest of the history/background is considered godmoding (otherwise making your character seem invincible or of importance) and a "Mary Sue" (a character or writing style that portrays ultimate traits).
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Tyrol



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PostSubject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan   Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Icon_minitimeWed Aug 19, 2009 10:15 pm

I have
4 Tootsie Pops!
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Alex



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PostSubject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan   Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Icon_minitimeThu Aug 20, 2009 2:35 pm

I never said He actually was the greatest , Its a title.
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PostSubject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan   Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Icon_minitimeThu Aug 20, 2009 6:56 pm

Regardless, it's still not allowed to show some sort of supremacy in your character.
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PostSubject: Re: Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan   Koto Kiso The great leader of the Kiso clan Icon_minitimeThu Aug 20, 2009 8:40 pm

Make a Valid Story Atleast?
And become the greatest while you roleplay along the way........ not make some bio telling us your the greatest then protesting it's a title.. because why bother having the title if your not the so called best?
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